Commence Holding Breath – Take 2

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I expect by this Friday morning I’ll be feeling a bit like Eliza did when she received some life-shattering news:

Her lungs squeezed as if she still wore a corset, a knee in her back as Molly pulled its strings tight, sucking the air of her. She couldn’t breathe.

Eliza is off into the hands of seven beta readers. No one else has read this draft #6 in its entirety, post-editing based on my developmental editor’s suggestions. I’m excited, nervous, and ready to hold my breath for the next 4-5 weeks while I await their feedback.  Yet, I feel so fortunate to have connected with these seven readers. Each of them will bring a different perspective to help me move into the next round of polishing to ensure Eliza’s story will shine and wow the pants of agents and publishers.

(2) readers are men I’ve met from writing groups. I was advised to definitely have a couple of men read to provide a male perspective. My brother doesn’t count. One of them is also a Judge. He’s already reviewed a courtroom scene for me, but it will be great to have him read the rest of the story, especially since there’s a Judge in Eliza’s family, too

(1) reader is a woman doctor. Her review is paramount to confirm my presentation of medical scenes, as well as the emotions, motivations, and responses of Eliza.

(1) is a documentary producer and MD/PhD candidate in behavioral neuroscience. Her eye for historical detail will definitely be welcomed as well as her medical school experience.

(3) are women friends – one is also an aspiring writer whom I met at the St. Augustine writer’s conference, so she has a smidgen of background on the story. One is from my book club who participated in last year’s beta read; should be interesting to hear her take on the transformation of the story over the past 12 months. And the third is a long-time friend and avid reader. Her dream is to open a Books & Bagel shop in Hawaii. My dream is to hold a book signing at her store. 🙂

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Now, what to do while I wait for feedback?? Hang this wicked-cool hat on my head, pack up my TBR pile and hit the beach and hammock (after regular work hours). Here’s my TBR pile – what’s yours for the next month or so?

P.S. My hat is on its way. I opted-out of Prime delivery in order to get the digital credit they offer. Makes those Kindle specials even less. If you’re interested, the hat’s on Amazon for $19.95, available HERE.

And, don’t forget – I post Kindle specials on a regular basis on my Facebook page – make sure you’re following to get in on the deals I scour and post for books I’ve read.

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A Light at the End of the Tunnel

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I’m taking a quick break tonight after nearly three days straight of editing, re-working some scenes and writing a few new ones. I need it after moving through the wedding night and into World War I and the Spanish influenza. Whew! The tension! I hope it comes through on my pages as much as I felt it putting the words down. Here’s a sneak peak as some of my research references for these chapters. Can you imagine what my Google search history looks like???

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This puts me at five more chapters to edit and two, maybe three, new ones to write. After reading through my editor’s comments again, I’m relieved to see those last chapters’ edits should be minimal. No more “head-hopping” (switching Point of View mid-scene) to fix. I’m further bouyed by her comment of “Write one of your strong ending lines here.” I’ve worked hard to have scenes and chapters end with a “Mic Drop” type of impression – a BOOM – and just leave it there for the reader to mull over.

So, the light is shining bright at the end of the tunnel. With another couple of vacation days and a few writing sprints scheduled with a new online writers’ group, I should be ready for my next round of beta readers by August 1. For anyone I’ve contacted about reading, I’ll be in touch soon with more information before I send you the manuscript.

The path has been long, especially when I look back to where I was the last time I used this photo – The Path May Be Long  – two years ago when I sent a few chapters out to preview readers to prep for my first writers’ conference. My writing has improved dramatically. Eliza has grown right along with me. I’m happy to be on this path with her.

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Bookmarked: Reviews Q2 2020

Q2 2020 Books

Time will tell how the surreal months of April to June 2020 will be chronicled in history. I’ve heard many friends claim they haven’t been able to focus on reading. For me, I’ve relied on reading and writing to escape the news of the day. From the Battle of Britain to the Latin American immigration trail to the final days of ratifying the 19th Amendment to the horrors of a Canadian orphanage to the Japanese-American internment camps during WWII, these struggles are real, even if a few are fictionalized. They make wearing a mask, eating take-out instead of dining-in, and adhering to social distancing guidelines seem trivial in comparison.

From left to right, top to bottom, here are quick reviews of the ten books I read this quarter. Each book is linked to Amazon for additional reviews and convenient purchasing.

***** Sea Wife by Amity Gaige  The April release of Sea Wife came as lock-downs were in full swing. I was disappointed the author event with Amity Gaige was cancelled as I was hoping to catch up with her in-person. Amity taught my Coursera Creative Writing class and also invited me to a writers’ retreat two years ago. I didn’t care for Amity’s other book I read ahead of our retreat, but with honest affirmation I’m giving Sea Wife five stars. Sea Wife presents an intimate look at a marriage heading toward drowning in a sea of regrets while the young Partlow family sails around Central America. For a more complete review, visit the post Authors on (Virtual) Tour. At least with the advances in Zoom, I was able to join an online presentation for the book release.  To whet you interest, here’s an example of Amity’s poetic prose:

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*** Daughter of Moloka’i by Alan Brennert   As the sequel to Moloka’i , which I read years ago with my book club, I had high hopes for Daughter of. Perhaps the gut-wrenching story of the leper colony in Hawaii, a situation I had never heard of before made it difficult for the story of Ruth (daughter of) to follow in those impressionable footsteps. Ruth’s story, despite time spent in a Japanese-American internment camp as a young mother, lacks an emotional punch. As a writer, I’m learning how important conflict is to engage and hold a reader’s interest.

** The Last Bathing Beauty by Amy Sue Nathan  I’ve never been much of a soap opera or Hallmark Channel fan. Listening to The Last Bathing Beauty on Audible was all the more irritating with a main character nicknamed “Boop”. Hearing that name said out loud over and over further drove this one down to two-stars. But, if you’re in need of an easy, sappy read or listen, and want to capture some of the Dirty Dancing feeling from the book’s setting at a Lake Michigan resort, by all means, check it out.

** The Murmur of Bees by Sophia Segovia  Intrigued by the promotion Murmur of Bees covered the 1918 Spanish influenza in Mexico, I picked it up. I ended up being disappointed that the subject covered only a few chapters and brought in a character who faded away (not died) without any further reference. The pace was extremely slow over 470 pages to follow the trials of the wealthy Morales family, an orphaned child with a mysterious aura, and the Mexican revolution. The political maneuverings of the revolution became complex to follow. I struggled through to the end to discover the most captivating part of the book were the final chapters – could have been a fine novella.

**** The Splendid and the Vile by Erik Larson  While I waited for the return of my manuscript from my editor, apparently I found time to read LONG books. The Splendid and the Vile is the newest non-fiction from the master, Erik Larson. The amount of research Larson applies to every book he writes is overwhelming. He didn’t disappoint to bring forward an intimate look at Winston Churchill’s handling of the first year of World War II with Germany’s endless bombardments during the Battle of Britain. For someone who wrote their high school European history term paper on the Battle of Britain, I loved learning even more about the man behind Britain’s Darkest Hour. I also caught Larson on a Zoom presentation after his author event, which I was scheduled to attend was cancelled: Authors on (Virtual) Tour. I may also be partial to Larson since my son enjoys his books, too. It’s great to have a shared interest with your 25-year-old, Only 14 Shopping Days Left

**** The Woman’s Hour by Elaine Weiss  Another dense, non-fiction selection. What was I thinking? While the subject was interesting – the final weeks leading to the ratification of the 19th amendment with passage in Tennessee – oh boy, where there a lot of characters / names to track! One reason I’ve never gotten involved in politics – way too many fingers in the pie. The factions within the suffrage movement forced me to write everyone down so I could keep them straight. And, don’t get me started on the Antis – women against ratification. I’m glad to have read it, however, as part of a new alumnae virtual book club with my alma mater. A good selection, and I chose it as one option for my August book club meeting when we’ll be celebrating the 100th Anniversary. Votes for Women! Yeah! Votes for Women

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***** The Home for Unwanted Girls by Joanna Goodman Delayed by a month, my book club finally managed an in-person meeting to discuss Home for Unwanted Girls. Our hostess extraordinaire re-fitted her two-car garage for us to sit on folding chairs six feet apart. She even had individual snack bags prepared for us to avoid many hands in the chip bowl. You’re the best, Bonnie! The night only got better with an active discussion of this moving book inspired by the author’s mother. The tragic lives of Maggie and her daughter, Elodie, diverge and reunite against the backdrop of the cruelty of Catholic-run orphanages and the societal biases of French and Anglo citizens of Quebec in the 1950s. The injustices portrayed in the book are reminiscent of Before We Were Yours by Lisa Wingate. I took minor comfort in learning evil lurks for vulnerable children in Canada, too.

*****American Dirt by Jeanine Cummins  On purpose I avoided reading the details of the controversy circulating around the publication of American Dirt. I wanted to read it without a predetermined bias. I’m glad I took that approach. I’m of the opinion that it doesn’t matter who writes a novel, as long as their research to provide authenticity, and talent for storytelling and character development brings a saga to life. One of my favorite books is Memoirs of a Geisha. Arthur Golden is not Japanese, he’s not a woman, nor did he ever work as a geisha. That doesn’t mean the book isn’t masterful, worthy of a nomination for the PBS Great American Reads as a favorite novel. I don’t recall any outcry when it released twenty-one years ago.

Jeanine Cummins is not Mexican nor Central American, but she is and identifies as Latina (Puerto Rican and Irish). She’s a writer and an advocate for social justice. She didn’t choose to publish a book about Mexican migrants and the horrific trials of their journey over a Mexican author. The publisher made the choice to select and back her manuscript over others which may have been submitted by Mexican authors. The true power of American Dirt comes from the empathy developed for the main character, Lydia, as she flees her home in Acapulco with her eight-year-son. She starts her journey to “el norte” to escape a shattered life at the hands of a cartel. From riding the top of freight cars, La Bestia, with other migrants to sleeping in the desert, to hiding in Underground Railroad type shelters, you are with Lydia and the others in her group every step north. I was fortunate to join a Zoom call with Jeanine sponsored by my local independent bookstore. She stands by her conviction that American Dirt is a novel of social justice which drives conversations. I’m impressed with her conviction and give her five stars – a must read in this time of awakening and ownership of self-identity.

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***Yellow Crocus by Laila Ibrahim  A title I had seen floating around the several book groups I belong to on Facebook. A quick, easy read about the relationship between a plantation owner’s daughter, Elizabeth (Lisbeth) and her wet nurse slave, Mattie, in 1850s Virginia. Similar to my historical fiction in the works, Lisbeth rails against her parents’ and society’s expectations to follow her heart. We get a few glimpses of Mattie’s slave life, including her escape through the Underground Railroad. A happily-ever-after for both women wraps up the story. There are two additional books, Mustard Seed and forthcoming, Golden Poppies, following the subsequent years, post-Civil War, for the women.

****Valentine by Elizabeth Wetmore  I didn’t select my recent books with the intention of learning more about Mexico and Mexican immigrants, but somehow ended up with three in three months. In addition to Murmur of Bees and American Dirt, one of the main characters in Valentine, Gloria (Glory), is the daughter of an illegal immigrant. Her mother is deported back to Mexico leaving 15-year-old Gloria alone with an uncle to navigate the aftermath of her vicious rape by a oil worker drifter. Set in 1970s Odessa Texas, the story alternates POV between Glory, Mary Rose, Debra Ann, and Cora, along with a  few other women – who didn’t deserve their own POV IMHO – whose lives intersect after Gloria’s rape. The ending is a bit muddied, but overall I enjoyed this deeply moving story of women’s relationships and the support networks they weave.

In addition to the ten books above, I have two other recommendations. 

*****Answer Creek by Ashley Sweeney  I posted a review of Answer Creek in my Q1 2020 post since I read an ARC prior to its May 19th publication. Ashley is my writing mentor to whom I am so grateful for her guidance and advice as I push along with developing Eliza’s story and her character. Answer Creek follows the trek of fictional Ada Weeks along the Oregon Trail with the Donner Party. Ashley’s incredible descriptions of a setting from over 150 years ago are magnificent. Ada’s character development is on point as we watch her grow in strength and spirit. Answer Creek goes on BookBub and other e-book retailers special at $.99 on July 4th.

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Errant by Montrez  I have not read Errant yet, with the confession YA Fantasy doesn’t interest me, nor do I know many teens these days who may be interested. However, since it’s a debut novel from one of my writing group friends, I definitely wanted to help her promote the title. If you’re interested in Fantasy, or know some teens that might enjoy it – please check it out. I mean look at the cover – it’s gorgeous! Story Descriptor: 16-year-old Savannah Scarlett struggles to reclaim her life after the devastating loss of her father, but finding a place to belong isn’t easy for someone who’s used to living life on the sidelines. Just when she thinks things can’t get any worse, Savannah witnesses an impossible phenomenon that triggers the emergence of a wild and powerful gift. Fans of Divergent and the Darkest Mind are sure to enjoy. Only $.99 on Kindle. 

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Update on “Eliza’s Story” – Title still TBD 

And, what about Eliza??? June has been a slow month for editing. Between work demands and prepping two houses for the summer season, I have plowed through 15 chapters. I also had to write a new chapter for an early insert to build out a relationship more and scrap several scenes and re-shape them. I’ve also purchased a valuable tool, Pro Writing Aid, which helps me identify over-used words and readability levels. There are a lot of blurred eyes I need to attend to!

I’m hoping some vacation days in July will be dedicated to polishing the story and preparing for my next round of beta readers.

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Onward and Upward

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The Washington Post, 5/31/2020: “The docking was a delicate and dangerous part of the mission. The spacecraft chased down the space station, traveling in orbit at 17,500 m.p.h., but then approached very slowly in a series of carefully choreographed maneuvers.”

SpaceX docked this afternoon, realizing its mission to deliver Astronauts Bob Behnken and Doug Hurley to the International Space Station. From lift-off to traveling through 254 miles in space to the intricate alignment of the two vehicles to allow transfer, the immensity of this accomplishment is mind-boggling and humbling.

The task ahead of me to edit Eliza’s story seems trivial in comparison. Yet, here I am. Sitting in my little corner of the universe. Six pages of summary notes and 321 pages of tracked changes and inserted comments from my editor spread across the table. After five anxious weeks, Eliza is home. She awaits as I strap into my writing position to blast off into the great beyond of Manuscript Draft #6.

I haven’t worked for 2.5 years on this novel to abort my mission.

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I’m ready to push onward and upward.

  • To polish the story into a historical fiction which educates and entertains readers.
  • To reach the top of this long struggle and bask in the glow of pride and praise.
  • To share the inspiration of Eliza’s story with others.

I’m kicking off this next leg of my writing journey with a workshop offered by the Women’s Fiction Writers Association, Grabbing the Reader. We’ll be refining the first 500 words of our novel with review and input from peers. If you can’t engage a reader in the first 500 words (approximately the first 1.5 pages), your novel may be doomed. Take a moment and look at the opening of the book you’re currently reading. Do the first couple of pages accomplish these goals?

  1. Is the first line evocative?
  2. Can you decipher where and when the story takes place?
  3. Is the main character named?
  4. Who is she in terms of her age, life situation, lifestyle, characteristics, personality?
  5. What motivates the main character?
  6. Are sentence lengths varied?
  7. Are there no repeated words/phrases?
  8. Is there one point of view?
  9. Is foreshadowing introduced?
  10. Are the senses invoked to make a scene come life?

I won’t bore you with the other 35 tips in the checklist. Suffice to say, I’ve got my work cut out for me for the next few weeks? Months? Astronauts Behnken and Hurley are expected to stay at the Space Station from anywhere between five weeks to four months. Let’s hope Eliza beats them in her mission – preparing to go off into the hands of another set of beta readers.

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Authors on (Virtual) Tour

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I’ve discovered one silver lining to our current Stay at Home situation – virtual talks with authors. With the unfortunate cancellation of live book signings and author talks, at least many have taken to the Internet to share their stories and discuss their writings. I’ve participated in four over the past four weeks. Listening to these talented writers speak from their homes somehow personalized the experience and made them more real.

The Island of Sea Women by Lisa See. One of my all-time favorite authors. Even though my book club had Skyped with Lisa for our discussion of Sea Women, she was a delight to hear her speak again about the women divers of Jeju Island, Korea and how she begins each one of her books by defining three core driving forces of her story: 1) What is the relationship focus? 2) What is the main emotion of the story? and 3) What is the historic backdrop? Excellent tips to keep in mind and a new assignment for me to reflect upon for Eliza’s story. I enjoyed Lisa’s virtual book talk via a Facebook Live session hosted by Adriana Trigiani, a very entertaining host. And, I agree with one of her comments – Lisa’s stories are like a beautiful Chinese silk – rich in layers. Check her out – she is holding weekly Live sessions on Tuesdays at 6pm EST. I also listened to her interview with Jamie Brenner, an author I hadn’t heard of before, but her latest release, Summer Longing, set in Provincetown MA sounds great. More info on our book club discussion of Sea Women, June 2019, HERE.

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The Splendid and the Vile by Erik Larson. I logged into this talk looking forward to learning from the master storyteller who makes the densest non-fiction book read like fiction, like his masterpieces: Devil in the White City, Isaac’s Storm, and Dead Wake. The opening discussion about his latest release on the London Blitz and Churchill’s leadership of the British people during those dark days of 1940 was fascinating. Brendan and I were scheduled to hear Larson at the Harvard Bookstore in late March which was unfortunately cancelled. However, we did receive our books at least and Brendan has already finished his copy, reporting 503 pages is L-O-N-G, but it held his interest, especially reading about bombs dropping across the city while people sat in their kitchens eating in breakfast. Puts our current situation in perspective for sure.

I have my copy next up on my pile. I abandoned the virtual talk, however, when the host turned the conversation into a political rant about current leadership. Regardless of your personal views, this was not the space for that type of dialogue. I’ll have to look for another Larson interview to learn more.

Sea Wife by Amity Gaige. OMG!!! I tried hard not to let my personal connection to Amity skew my opinion while I read Sea Wife. She was one of my writing course professors and the leader of my first writers’ retreat two years ago. I say with confidence and without hesitation, I loved this story for the poetic writing and personal connection Amity makes between the reader and the main character, Juliet. Readers who have lived through the self-questioning days of early motherhood and complicated by their own childhood experiences will find themselves standing in Juliet’s shoes – or sitting in her closet. Sea Wife presents an intimate look at a marriage heading toward drowning in a sea of regrets while the young Partlow family sails around Central America.

While I felt undertones of Kate Chopin’s classic The Awakening, written over 100 years ago, about a woman’s tragic struggle with self-definition, I appreciated the more modern resolution Juliet finds as she faces and battles her fears. Amity also engages the reader through a unique dual narrative approach, interchanging first person POV from Juliet telling her story with entries from the voyage log book of Juliet’s  husband, Michael, who uses the log as much as a diary as a nautical recount of their trip. The juxtaposition, including different fonts, provides a rapid pace to move through the story.

I marked many passages throughout the book which to me are more poetry than prose – a true testament to an author who can write both: She is like a fallen scrap of sky. We’re just a hyphen between our parents and our kids. The night deepened, dark as a well, and time fell into it. And, this gem:

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The Woman’s Hour by Elaine Weiss.  This August 2020, the United States will celebrate the ratification of the 19th Amendment to give women the right to vote. The Woman’s Hour details the final weeks leading up to the state vote in Tennessee to ratify. Tennessee held the distinct honor / privilege / curse of being the pivotal state to bring the Act forward for state voting. If it was approved, TN would be the 36th state, the magic number needed to secure a majority among the then 48 states.

I’m not sure I would have picked up The Woman’s Hour if it wasn’t the first selection of a virtual book club organized by Wheaton College’s Alumnae group. But, I’m glad I did. Weiss’ meticulous research shone through to present a cast of characters which seemed to be in the thousands. I have to admit I needed my own chart to keep track of them all. From the two factions of supporters – the National Woman’s Party led by Alice Paul and the National American Woman Suffrage Association led by Carrie Catt – to the Antis (women against the vote!!! insert mad face emoji here!) led by Mary Kilbreth, to the state Senators, Representatives, Governor Roberts, local journalists, to the two presidential candidates for the 1920 election (Cox and Harding), each one was actively involved in the cliff-hanger days of political maneuverings through the streets and halls of Nashville.

While I enjoyed learning more of the work that went into the years which led to the fateful days in August 2020 and appreciate the dedication of the suffragists, the glad-handing and back-door promises, etc. etc. underscored why I have minimal interest in politics. This statement pretty much sums it up for me: “The strategic schism isn’t uncommon in social and political movements  – all the different factions are confusing to the legislators and the public.” Um, hello – how many Democratic candidates did we start out with leading up to this summer???? I rest my case.

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Mother’s Day Bookish Gifts

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Below are some Mother’s Day gift ideas with book choices recommended through a Facebook poll I recently ran. If you order them now (titles are linked to Amazon for convenience), maybe they’ll arrive in time for the special woman in your life – mother, mother-in-law, sister, daughter, daughter-in-law, niece or friend – anyone who should be celebrated for their role as a mother.

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My Recommendation: Tea Girl of Hummingbird Lane by Lisa See paired with a sampler of Pu’re tea, and a delicate English tea cup and saucer (available from any second-hand or antique store as attics get emptied of Grandma’s favorites). As usual, Lisa See delivers a powerful story of mothers and daughters, this time set among the Akha people of the mountain area of southwest China combined with the economics of growing tea. Below: China pattern inspiration for appearance in Eliza’s story. china

Other Top Suggestions

  • The Joy Luck Club by Amy Tan. Is this a trend? Asian-American women writing about mother-daughter relationships? Maybe. Doesn’t matter – another great suggestion. Pair it with you own Mah Jongg set for an extra special gift to spend time together.
  • Mothers come in all forms, shapes, sizes, and colors. Sue Monk Kidd’s debut novel, Secret Life of Bees, evokes the idea a mother’s love can come from those beyond the ones that gave us life. Add a delicious jar of honey to accompany this tender story.

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  • Another Hulu adaption which hit the best-seller lists and explores a whole other, dystopian idea of motherhood is Margaret Atwood’s The Handmaid Tale. Along a similar vein, if not quite as radical, is The Farm by Joanne Ramos. Both choices would fuel provocative discussions with any mother. Well, maybe not any mother. I’m not sure I could have discussed surrogacy with my Mom. Loved her and miss her, but she was definitely a woman from past generations. Janis Mom Spring 1967 A
  • Another one I’m not familiar with but was mentioned several times: Stepping Heavenward by Elizabeth Prentiss. 
  • The Beach House by Mary Alice Monroe – everyone needs a beach book to read, especially one which extolls how true love involves sacrifice, family is forever and the mistakes of the past can be forgiven. Of course, beach reads means the perfect tote to carry them off to sandy stretches by the shore. beach tote
  • Plenty of others as well which I didn’t have time to fully research. Maybe consider an Amazon gift card for the special Mom in your life to choose her own:
    • A Mother’s Goodbye – Kate Hewitt
    • Charms for the Easy Life – Kaye Gibbons
    • Mama’s Bank Account – Kathryn Forbes
    • Amy and Isabelle – Elizabeth Strout
    • First Mothers – Bonnie Angelo
    • This is How It Always Is – Laurie Franke
    • The Red Tent – Anita Diamant
    • Divine Secrets of the YaYa Sisterhood
    • Shell Seekers
    • When I Married My Mother
    • Mama’s Boy – Dustin Lance Black
    • Guernsey Literary and Potato Peel Pie Society – Mary Ann Shaffer and Annie Bowers
    • The House of the Spirits – Isabel Allende
    • The Mermaid Chair – Sue Monk Kidd
    • Mom & Me & Mom – Maya Angelou
    • Pachinko – Min Jin Lee
    • Beloved – Toni Morrison
    • Terms of Endearment
    • The Wednesday Sisters
    • The Mother Daughter Book Club
    • A Very Distinctly Outrageous Mother
    • The Habit
    • Joanna Brady series – JA Jance
    • Sense and Sensibility – Jane Austen
    • Motherest
    • Dream Daughter
    • A Grown Up Kind of Pretty
    • The Mummy Bloggers
    • Karen Kingsbury’s Baxter Family series
    • Janette Oke’s Love Comes Softly series
    • The Grapes of Wrath – John Steinback
    • The Last Anniversary – Liane Moriarity
    • The Bean Trees and Pigs in Heaven – Barbara Kingsolver
    • The Almost Sisters
    • The Family Upstairs
    • Ginny Moon
    • Lots of Candles, Lots of Cake – Anna Quindlen
    • Caroline – biography of Caroline Ingalls
    • One True Thing – Anna Quindlen
    • Dream Daughter – Diane Chamberlain

Finally, I’m treating myself to a few choices by taking advantage of a great offer available on Amazon through May 3rd – 100 e-books under $5 each. I’ve already picked out Elton John’s biography, Me, and Being Mortal by Atul Gawande. Someone can tell my boys to load a gift card onto our Amazon account to cover them. They’re getting off the hook easy this year!

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Winning the Publication Game

“You rarely win, but sometimes you do.”
― Atticus Finch in To Kill a Mockingbird

As in legal cases, the same goes for publishing – you rarely win, but sometimes you do. The only way you’ll ever find out is by fighting the good fight.

I’m continuing my fight toward publishing Eliza’s story with another step closer. Yesterday, I sent the fifth draft out to a professional editor. Over the last two months, I’ve refined my characters and story arc based on feedback from my writing mentor. I also heeded the advice I received at the St. Augustine’s writers’ conference and cut the 50 years span down to 23 years (1897-1920). This rework allows me to focus the story more on Eliza becoming a doctor, and leaves the door open for Book 2 when she is a doctor. 

As I try to remain a realist, I’m bracing for another re-work when I hear back from this editor. She provided me with sample comments for my first eight pages and I realize there will be more work ahead. 

In the meantime, while I wait for those suggested edits, I’m continuing my efforts to build followers of potential readers- like you! – who will be eager to read Eliza’s story when I win the holy grail of publication. To increase my odds of winning those followers, I’d like to enlist your help. 

Enter to Win an Amazon Gift Card  

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Between now and April 30th, I’m running a sweepstakes to giveaway a $25 Amazon gift card. It’s free, and easy, to enter and I’ve included methods to award bonus entries. All you have to do is any one of the following:

entry method

RULES

  1. To follow this blog (if you’re not already) – sign up through the pop-up or fill out the form on the Contact page to send me a note. I’ll send you an invite and you need to confirm you want to follow.
  2. To follow me on Facebook (if you’re not already) – click here Facebook @ Janis Robinson Daly – Author Hit follow/like and post a comment to the page that you’re entering the sweepstakes. FYI – I’m posting lots of cool tips on the page, including special deals I find on Kindle – like $1.99 deals.
  3. Send me (5) email addresses of friends – PLEASE OBTAIN PERMISSION FIRST to share these email addresses with me.
    1. Send them through the Contact Page or email to janisrdaly@comcast.net
    2. I’ll be sending them an invite to follow the blog. Even if those friends already follow my blog, you still receive the points. If any new ones sign up, you receive 2 more entries. Same if any of them follow my blog.
  4. On April 30, 2020 at 9pm EST, I will assemble all the entries, including the bonus entries, and will pull the winner through a random number selector.
  5. Winner will be notified by email and sent an e-gift card from Amazon. $25 should buy a good number of Kindle specials to get you through (hopefully) the final stay-at-home weeks.

Questions? Just shoot me a note through the Contact page or comment below.

Good Luck!!  And, Thank You!

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I invite you to follow my blog for book reviews and to follow my journey toward writing my first historical fiction.  More information in my Novel Synopsis. You can sign up from this page with the pop-up, or send me a note through the CONTACT page and I can email you an invitation to follow. I’m on social media, too:

  • On Facebook @ Janis Robinson Daly – Author — Follow me on Facebook where I also post info on the Amazon Deals I find on books I recommend
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Bookmarked: Reviews Q1 2020

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The first three months of the new decade, 2020, will be marked in history. Our surreal month of March has made everyday utterances of Covid-19, social distancing and N59 masks. We’ll all hope these terms will fade into the pages of history very soon. Until then, here are the books I read to start the year. Perhaps one will spark your interest to download to your Kindle account or order up from your Libby app.

From homesteading in late 1800’s Wyoming, to the hospitality of Gander Newfoundland after 9/11, to a commencement speech at U Texas in 2014, my range has been wide and pleasurable.

In no particular order that the design template assembled:

*** Where the Forest Meets the Stars  I’m doubtful I would have chosen this one if it hadn’t been the choice for a library book club I wanted to attend in FLA during our February trip. In some manners, the story evoked another “Where” book – Where the Crawdads Sing. The main characters are both female naturalists who have suffered the loss of their parents. They replace those losses with other forms of love. In Forest, Joanna Teale encounters a lost child who claims to be from another world. Jo struggles with moral questions of keeping the child instead of turning her over to social services. A fairly predictable story unfolds. I did enjoy the meeting, however, and met a few more potential readers for “Eliza’s Story”.  For another look at parallels in storytelling: Parallel Lines

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**** A Doll’s House  Ibsen’s classic play from 1879. I picked it up for a quick research study into the idea of a New Woman as, like The Awakening by Kate Chopin, it explores a woman’s desires to find a deeper meaning to her life. The opening of my novel delves into this question, too, for 18-year old Eliza Pearson Edwards.

**** One for the Blackbird One for the Crow  A 180-degree turn from Doll’s House to another 1870s came with One for the Blackbird set in the homesteading days of Wyoming. An interesting twist of a murder in the first chapter leaves a wife and her husband’s lover to rely on each other to survive a Wyoming winter. United by a friendship which develops between their children, the women realize the only way to survive is to accept their reality. Rich details of prairie life throughout the nearly 500 pages – my only complaint, it dragged in some spots.

** Indigo Girl  I had high hopes for this fictionalization of the true story of Eliza Lucas, a South Carolina plantation owner’s daughter who in 1739 was left in charge of the household and managing her father’s businesses while he returns to Grenada seeking a higher military appointment with the Crown. As an untold story of a woman’s success in history, I thought there would be similarities to draw upon for my novel. While the research and information around growing indigo were interesting, I found the writing basic and uninspiring. God, I hope readers don’t say that about my work. Perhaps because I read it right after my writer’s conference, my antennae was pricked to look for over-use of adverbs, redundancies and run-on sentences.

***** Answer Creek  My Good Reads review of the ARC follows. Answer Creek releases May 19, 2020 from my writing mentor and fellow Wheaton alum, Ashley Sweeney. Sending positive thoughts to Ashley that she’ll be able to commence her planned book tour by May. More information on our connection and Ashley’s debut, award-winning novel, Eliza Waite here: I Love My Village.

My feet are sore. My lips are cracked. My stomach yearns. My bones rattle. My eyes freeze. My body aches. My skin burns. My heart weakens. I have walked over two thousand miles from Missouri to California. I have walked in Ada Weeks’ worn boots, with their soles flapping against dust-filled, wagon-rutted paths. I have walked in the boots Ada removed from a dead man to trudge through snow drifts up to her chest.

Ashley Sweeney’s talent to dig deep and pull forth the physical and emotional aspects of a character shines in her second novel, Answer Creek. Ada Weeks, a fictional character inserted into the overland California Trail of the ill-fated Donner Party in 1846, is the heroine of Answer Creek. She earns her title, and then some, through her sheer will and fortitude to survive against the odds and reach the promised land of California where she can start a new life, with or without a man by her side.

Other characters complement Ada on the journey west, but it’s the vivid details and descriptions of the terrain and weather which cast them as antagonistic characters in the story that help them stand on their own.

In a time when women of today still search for the women of history to learn from and lean upon, Ada Weeks is a pioneering character who embodies our pasts and drives our futures. We all need more Ada Weeks in our lives.

P.S. How cool is this? Ashley made an ad of my review – watch for it through social media.

Answer Creek ad

***** What the Wind Knows I discovered this one and the talented writer, Amy Harmon, when I put out a query through my Facebook reading groups for recommendations of a dual timeline novel. I had begun playing with an idea for my second novel during a writing lull while I waiting for more feedback. What the Wind Knows is more of a time travel akin to Outlander than a dual time line (Fall of Marigolds is a better example of a dual time line). Regardless, I’m glad I picked it up for an intriguing story of Ireland in 1921. Our family trip to Ireland came to life reading the fictional love story of Anne Gallagher and Tom Smith entwined with real-life events and the leader of the Irish revolt, Michael Collins. More information here: Imprisoned by Research Details

**** The Day the World Came to Town  How is it I never heard the true story of 38 international flights being grounded in the remote island community of Gander Newfoundland as 9/11 happened? Talk about a community coming together to care for others. Thousands of passengers and crew found themselves spending four days crammed into schools, churches and community centers with bed linens loaned by the townspeople. Those residents also fed them and welcomed strangers of all nationalities into their homes to use showers and phones. A real-life reporting of the experiences, it is now a Broadway show. Let’s hope Broadway opens up again soon. I’d love to see these uplifting story brought to life.

**** Labyrinth of Ice  Forty-eight hours in a car for a round-trip drive from NH to FL gave Jim and I (and Taylor, too) plenty of time to listen to Labyrinth of Ice, a recounting of the Lt. A. W. Greely Expedition to the far reaches of Greenland near the Arctic polar cap beginning in 1881. My God. Being asked to stay inside and watch Netflix is not a story of survival. Twenty-five men spending eight months in make-shift huts living off an occasional seal kill and shrimp caught in hand-made nets, that’s survival. An epic saga of will and faith.

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**** Make Your Bed To end the month, I read the short book of former Navy Seal and Admiral William H. McRaven’s address and back story of his speech delivered to the graduating class of the University of Texas at Austin on their Commencement day in 2014. The simplest lessons of succeeding in life can begin with making your bed and being aware of the power we carry within us to overcome. Amen, Admiral. 1850844

I invite you to follow my blog for book reviews and to follow my journey toward writing my first historical fiction.  More information in my Novel Synopsis. You can sign up from this page with the pop-up, or send me a note through the CONTACT page and I can email you an invitation to follow. I’m on social media, too:

  • On Facebook @ Janis Robinson Daly – AuthorFollow me on Facebook where I also post info on the Amazon Deals I find on books I recommend
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Bookish Report of March 2020

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Exhausted by an endless stream of news reports, without even the whir of the annoying dribble of March Madness to break up the facts, figures, myths and rumors?

Feeling cabin fever set in after only two days of social distancing?

Afraid binge-watching ten seasons of “Friends” in a single sitting may expand your derriere to the size of a 24-pack of Charmin – which apparently is rarer than a white rhinoceros these days?

Nervous your boss may ask for a video chat while you’re still in your PJs, the kids are in theirs and running amok in the background, and the dog is constantly pawing your leg to remind you it’s ok to open the door and let her out?

It’s time to take a deep breath, hit the remote’s Power Off button, and say thank you to Amazon for inventing the Kindle app and Overdrive for connecting Libby to our local libraries so we can still access books without visiting stores and libraries, which are mostly closed now anyway.

While I have not used Libby and cannot attest to its pros and cons, I am a long-time Kindle user and most recently a Kindle Unlimited member which allows me to download up to ten books a month for a flat monthly charge. I’m never without a full library books right on my tablet with the flick of an ON button.

The best part? A Kindle Unlimited membership is free for your first month – you can try it for the next four weeks of social distancing to get close to thousands of books of your choice. Click HERE for more info and to start your free month trial.

The next dilemma may be – What to Read? I’ve got you covered there, too.

  1. Included on my blog is a separate section of Book Recommendations, many with direct links to Amazon for easy Kindle access.
  2.  Follow my Facebook page where I post book reviews, Special Deals I find on Kindle books – like $.99 – $2.99 – less than a cup of coffee, and of course the continuing journey of writing Eliza’s story.  Facebook @ Janis Robinson Daly – Author

I hope you Stay Well, Stay Calm, and Read On!

Imagination_Susan Cooper

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I invite you to follow my blog for book reviews and to follow my journey toward writing my first historical fiction.  More information in my Novel Synopsis. You can sign up from this page with the pop-up, or send me a note through the CONTACT page and I can email you an invitation to follow. I’m on social media, too:

  • On Facebook @ Janis Robinson Daly – AuthorFollow me on Facebook where I also post info on the Amazon Deals I find on books I recommend
  • On Instagram @janisrdaly_writer
  • On Twitter @janisrdaly_writer